WRITING a BIOGRAPHY
Boys by Mary
"Life Story"

 
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BACKGROUND:
Life Story is
a non-fiction writing that  brings another person to life
                           
PURPOSE:
to reveal a subject through your eyes.                                
to honor someone special.
to practice good interviewing techniques
to practice good writing skills

WHOM do you write about?    Anyone you respect, admire, or are interested in.

HOW do I get the information?  Observation and previous knowledge and open-ended interview questions (see examples below…)
 
                                                               “Tell about a favorite childhood memory.”
                                                                “Are you a giver or a taker?  Explain.”
                                                                “If you could have any job in the world, what would it be and why?”                                                          
                                                                                                                     

SECTIONS:

1.   PREFACE - Introduce your person by hooking the reader with a LEAD sentence: an anecdote, quotation, or question. Discuss a little about why you chose your person. Also state the theme of your paper.  (Example: My mom truly cares about her family and she would do anything for her kids.)

2.    CHAPTERS - Here’s where you’ll really show us who your person is, what they do, what they like, and what they think.  Good interview questions and observations skills will help you with the details.  You might want to include some quotes from your person, but generally, the writing is in your own words. You should have five chapters. Possible chapter titles:
     Family
     Firsts and Lasts
     Favorite activities
     Philosophy of Life
     Job/School - What's good/what's not?
     Hopes and Dreams
     Struggles
     Top Five Things you Love

3. CONCLUSION - Wrap up with a personal response or observation of your person. Reword or re-emphasize the theme.  End with a “clincher” sentence; that’s a short sentence that wraps things up.  (example - She has truly earned the title of “Super Mom”.)

 

 

 

 

HELPFUL HINTS:

                                1.     Use vivid, powerful words.

Common Words
 

Synonyms
 

LAUGH

chortle, chuckle, grin, guffaw, crow, titter, cackle, hoot, giggle, snicker

CRY

whimper, wail, blubber, howl, weep, moan, whine, bawl, sob, sniffle

HAPPY

tickled, elated, thrilled, lighthearted, delighted, ecstatic, blissful, jovial, overjoyed, jubilant

SAD

pitiable, downhearted, , forlorn, dispirited, miserable, wretched, dejected, disheartened, depressed

WALK

swagger, trek, saunter, shuffle, plod, meander, amble, trudge, step, stroll

RUN

dash, speed, dart, race, scramble, chase, scamper, bolt, trot, scoot

2.     Show, don’t tell.

3.     Write in complete, varied sentences.

4.     Use paragraphs- each with a clear topic sentence.

5.     Use transitions between ideas and paragraphs. 

  • to expand - and, also, besides, finally, further, in addition, moreover, then
  • to exemplify -   as an illustration, for example, for instance, in fact, specifically, thus
  • to qualify  - but, certainly, however, to be sure
  • to summarize or conclude - and so, finally, in conclusion, in short, in sum, therefore, this shows, thus we see
  • to show logical relationships - as a result, because, by implication, for this reason, if, since, so, thus, therefore
  • to compare - also, as well, likewise, similarly
  • to contrast - although, but, despite, even though, nevertheless, on the other hand, yet
  • to show relationships in space - above, behind, below, beyond, in front of, nearby, next to, over, through, within
  • to show relationships in time - after, before, between, earlier, formerly, later, longer than, meanwhile, since

                                   6.     Use good grammar and correct spelling.

                                   7.     Type your final draft and attach:  assessment, rough drafts, interview questions and notes.
 

"LIFE STORY”  - Biography Assessment
 

 
  _______10  Intro - Introduces your person with a lead by hooking the reader with an anecdote, quotation, or  question. Gives some general information about the  person. States the theme of your paper.

_______50  Chapters - Show us who your person is, what they do, like, and think

_______10  Conclusion - Wraps up the paper with a personal response or observation of your person. 
         Rewords or re-emphasizes the theme. Ends with a clincher sentence.

_______10  Uses paragraphs- each with a clear topic sentence

_______10  Uses transitions between ideas and paragraphs

_______10  Uses good grammar and correct spelling.

______    TOTAL SCORE (TEST GRADE)